It’s never easy
Doing these haiku’s for you
My weekly challenge
Others are so good
Like you and you and more too
How do you do it?
I can’t get the word
Mechanical to fit in
That’s how mine sound though
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You did great!
Haiku Friday
i think you did awesome. that's how i feel about mine. while i love doing it, i always feel like mine are mechanical sounding!!
I think your haiku series is wonderful! And, I thank you for the mention. I don't know how I do it, really?
You did great. I like the mechanical sound sometimes. The choppyness (is that a word) makes it sound haikuish (ok, I'm just creating my own vocabulary today)
I loved the way you used what was on your mind to create today’s Haiku and it worked effectively! For me, it’s about relaxing and having fun … playing with the words … letting them flow however … trusting the process. Seems like that’s what you did. Thanks to the links you included for “newbies” like me. How fun to find you all!
Hugs and blessings,
Not mechanical at all. They are illustrative. I agree Mishi is awesome. Always.
I think you did great! And I'm with you on SAM!
I love the haikus that talk about not having anything to haiku about. hehehe
I thought you did great!
good job!!!
i have started to think in 5-7-5, and i'm constantly counting syllables on my fingers. sheesh!
You did awesome, color me impressed!
Looks good to me! :)
I always have a hard time, too.
But then I start talking about poop and well, it just kind of flows!
you did great! i think you're too hard on yourself. the fact that you fit a 4-syllable word in a feat in itself!
I liked it - maybe that'll be your signature style of haiku. :)
Three verses? You're way ahead of me!
This is so good, Cathy!
Well i enjoyed it, done much better than i ever could
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